Sunday, June 2, 2013

Adam and Eve - No Fig Leaves, Just Wine

I recently wrote a very short story for the NPR Three Minute Fiction challenge (which is really enjoyable, by the way, everyone should do it). I'll share my story here; it's a riff on a very old allegory.

Memos

Sarah was typing the second-to-last memo of the day. This one on the importance of good hygiene when using the restroom. Not that anyone didn't practice good hygiene; it would be in violation of company rules. And no one could disobey company rules. But reminders never hurt.

With the last click of her tidy keyboard, Sarah finished the memo and ran spellcheck. Satisfied that nothing was amiss, she clicked the “Send” button and the email was off to the rest of the staff.

Sarah glanced up. Across the room from her, in front of the window that looked out over a verdant office park, John was busy with spreadsheets. He sensed Sarah's gaze upon him and looked up. They smiled.

“I dusted off the books in the conference room today. You mentioned they needed a good cleaning.” Sarah knew this would make John happy.

“Thank you. The boss will be pleased the next time she has a meeting.” John was pleased that Sarah took the time to do something for the good of their boss, which was the whole reason they were there. “Which reminds me, before the boss left, she mentioned one of the keys on her keyboard was sticky. Would you have time to clean it?”

“Of course!” Sarah beamed as she rose from her desk and went to the supply cupboard in the corner near the copy machine. She plucked a can of electronics cleaning spray and a small cloth from inside, then strode to the glass door on the other side of the room. She opened it and entered.

A great mahogany desk sat in the middle of the room. Rays of light streamed in from large windows. The desk was almost empty, holding just a flatscreen monitor, a keyboard, and a large day planner. Sarah sat on the plush black chair in front of the keyboard and lifted the can of cleaning fluid. She was about to press the lever when she noticed a piece of paper tucked under the edge of keyboard. A private memo with the title “Apple.”

Sarah quickly looked away. She knew access to the boss's documents was forbidden, and she wasn't sure if reading the title of a memo would count. She busied herself with her cleaning duties. But the memo remained there, staring at her as she worked.

Sarah had always wondered what the boss did in her office all day. She knew it was something important, that the whole company depended on it, but she didn't know why it was never discussed. And this was a very short memo; just one line from what she could tell. Would it do any harm to read it?

She grasped the edge of the memo. Holding her breath, she pulled it out from under the keyboard and saw this sentence in haunting black and white:

“THERE ARE PEOPLE IN THE COMPANY WHO DISOBEY THE RULES. THIS IS THEIR CHOICE.”

Sarah's eyes grew wide. Before she could think, she dropped the spray can and cloth on the desk and ran out of the office. She flew to John's desk and slapped the memo down on his keyboard. He stopped working, glanced at the memo, and gasped.

“Sarah, what is this!”

“It's the truth!”

“You found this on the boss's desk, didn't you? We have to put it back.”

“No, I'm not giving it back. The others need to know. I'm writing another memo.”


Sarah rushed back to her desk and starting typing the last memo of the day.


And that's it! Short and sweet. There's something liberating about a tiny word limit. You can only use the words that absolutely matter to the story.

The wine choice for this week is the Veuve Clicqout Rose´ ($65). It smelled delicious and fruity straight out of the bottle, with a great pinkish/blush color. It had a fruity flavor with a little hint of spice that balanced the sugars nicely. It had a sharp finish and only a dash of bready flavor to it (so if you don't like bready champagnes, you will like this). And it goes very well with chocolate.

Score: She gives it a 4.5, he gives it a 4.

Recommended: Yes indeed!